One day i was out with my friends, but then all of a sudden the skies turned dark and rain began pouring down. Then we decided the best thing to do would be to go into one of our houses 'till the rain stopped. Then when we came back out there was a really awesome rainbow outside and we carried on with our game of football.
Three sentences = not a story for somebody of your ability Adam, please use this as a starting point for a great story!
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